revisions

So I have learned a couple things about revisions. First off what was nice about Roys class was that as long as the assignment was completed and turned in on time you could revise it later for a better grade. This was nice because you can see what you did wrong, revise it and get a passing grade. I revised my instructions, my application packet and my summary untill obtained a 5 on the assignments. So in conclusion revisions are great as long as your instructor allows you to do them.

instructions

Today I revised my instructions assignment. I originally received a 3. I revised the assignment by placing the pictures next to the instruction that fit the picture. Also i made a couple of grammar corrections. In conclusion i received a 5 on my instructions assignment. I feel that this was a great assignment to blog about because it is a good example of how easy it is to revise an assignment and get a better grade.

My summary

Today I’m bloging about my summary that I completed in Roy’s class. The reason I’m not revising the assignment is because I want to reflect on the exceptional outcome of the assignment. I received a 4 to Begin with and all the comments stated i started with a good intro, and a good ending however I needed to include more body to the essay. In conclusion I feel that the assignment was great simply because I would rather be more to the point however that’s why I received a 4 and not a 5.

revising

I revised my instructions assignment today in workshop. The reason i revised my instructions was to obtain a better grade and simply so have something to blog about. There are two weeks left for this semester so im doing everything in my power to pass all my classes. Plus blogging is a great way to improve writing skills and to express the things your doing..

Revising assignments

Today I started my own blog! I will periodically posting blogs on what assignments I’m revising, which assignments I   choose to revise  and simply other blog entries that pertain to my english 0750 class. Feel free to post comments and browse my blogs, thanks have a great day!

Hello world!

Today I started my own personal blog with worppress. The reason I have my own blog is to write about some assignments I am proud about and also revising assignments. Also I will include what i have learned from revising my assignments in all my blogs.